Oh yeah, i helped with the name!
sorry it took a while for me to drop by a review, but i am gonna 5 this song, and download it cause it kicks soo much ass!!! I will be on msn more now, i've just been busy, so i'm sorry about that man. keep it real bro, and we need to work on our collab more now that we have Vanguard. keep it real man!
Peace,
Alyk
Great! This is a very good first song!
I am very impressed with the way this turned out man! I think ur on your way to becoming quite successful one day in the audio portal! keep it up man!
-Alyk
Thanks Bro, just for that review I'll give you my retarded tits drawing 1/2 off...
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...nice.
More Ambient sounding to me
This song needs to be more powerful for it to sound industrial on my opinion man, indeed it is a great song! I honestly did love it, but it just needs to be more BANG to me, it's not dark or hardcore sounding to me, perhaps have more instruments going on at once, then it would sound great! Also add more drums so it has more of a working factory type sound almost, that would definately add more of an industrial feel rather than mellow, but like i said before I do love this song, and it's a 5/5 from me and a download dude! Perhaps u have Aim? if u do my sn is weirdodude17 or if not that then E-mail me at sp_alyk17@yahoo.com
Keep up the good work!
-Alyk
I'm glad you "loved it".
You're right when you said I can use more instruments, because there are only about 5 including the drums.
I don't have an AIM, but my email is petwoip@yahoo.com
lol
This was fucking awesome is all i have to say man lol
thankyou for the review
A few things which could have been different
First off i wasn't really feeling the beat u had going in the beginning, and when u brought in the first synth it sounded sloppy bringing it in, but i loved the way the synth sounded lol, so i give you props on that, and i also liked the effects u used. But when the first synth all of a sudden dissappeared that sounded kind of sloppy as well, maybe just fix that a little bit and you should be good ^^ just some constructive criticism, and also i feel that this falls more under the house genre, because it sounds like more of a club-ish song u know? Over-all though! i like it! 4/5 from me man, keep on making music dude!
Hmm...when I listen to the track again, the transitions are a bit lacking in smoothness. My only defence is that it sounded ok at the time!
Point taken though.
Thanks for your judgement. Its all useful.
Stay cool :)
Sounds better on a pc than on the phone
Dude i loved the piano man! This really is a great song bro, 5/5!
much love man,
Alyk
Yeah dude, for some reason we get a bad connection when I call ya. Nice songs man. later bro
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nice little remix u got here bro, u really are getting better man. Keep it up dude!
-Alyk
Thanks man, but you should know that you helped me on this and so did Jeremy. Thanks for this lil riff of the original. I just added my extras!
-DJ Yakuza-
WOW!!!!!
Dude this is fucking sweeeet man!!!!! This is probably the best song i've ever heard from u man!!!! 5/5 from me bro! much love man!!!
-Alyk
I dunno it was pretty basic... I kinda like this style of music though. I wish I could be as good as you though man. You should try an acid style track bro.
Mixin it up i see
This was pretty awesome man, i like it a lot, good job ^^
-Alyk
Thank you very much. I did'nt quite expect all this positive attitude from any1, mostly beacause my first submission flopped. Happy u enjoyed it =D
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