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A few things which could have been different

First off i wasn't really feeling the beat u had going in the beginning, and when u brought in the first synth it sounded sloppy bringing it in, but i loved the way the synth sounded lol, so i give you props on that, and i also liked the effects u used. But when the first synth all of a sudden dissappeared that sounded kind of sloppy as well, maybe just fix that a little bit and you should be good ^^ just some constructive criticism, and also i feel that this falls more under the house genre, because it sounds like more of a club-ish song u know? Over-all though! i like it! 4/5 from me man, keep on making music dude!

dj-padman1 responds:

Hmm...when I listen to the track again, the transitions are a bit lacking in smoothness. My only defence is that it sounded ok at the time!
Point taken though.
Thanks for your judgement. Its all useful.
Stay cool :)

Sounds better on a pc than on the phone

Dude i loved the piano man! This really is a great song bro, 5/5!

much love man,
Alyk

Chaoz-of-Yakuza responds:

Yeah dude, for some reason we get a bad connection when I call ya. Nice songs man. later bro

eh...

well it wasn't bad... just wasn't very good, u should work on ur trance a little bit more though. keep it real man!

-Alyk

hah

nice little remix u got here bro, u really are getting better man. Keep it up dude!

-Alyk

Chaoz-of-Yakuza responds:

Thanks man, but you should know that you helped me on this and so did Jeremy. Thanks for this lil riff of the original. I just added my extras!
-DJ Yakuza-

WOW!!!!!

Dude this is fucking sweeeet man!!!!! This is probably the best song i've ever heard from u man!!!! 5/5 from me bro! much love man!!!

-Alyk

Chaoz-of-Yakuza responds:

I dunno it was pretty basic... I kinda like this style of music though. I wish I could be as good as you though man. You should try an acid style track bro.

well....

not bad, but the sequence u used for the synth was left alone practically, and after a while it started to sound just like noise basically. U should have at least tweaked the filter settings on the sequence thing. thanks for reviewing my music man!

haha

This was fucking awesome dude, that's all I have to say lol

Hmm....

Well I'm sorry it took me a while to get around to a review but i havent been able to get on a pc for a while. This is indeed a very ambient song, but i'm not really feeling the beat going with the melodies completely, it kind of clashes at some points, and it also starts to sound a little cluttered when the high pitched riff comes in with all the other stuff at once, maybe fix the high pitched riff a little bit and clean up the beat a bit and this would be a lot better sounding in my opinion. Thank you for reviewing my music! i think this song does have a lot of potential, just needs a bit of cleaning up ^^

Take care man, and keep making music dude!

-Alyk

Mixin it up i see

This was pretty awesome man, i like it a lot, good job ^^

-Alyk

Mrxtreem85 responds:

Thank you very much. I did'nt quite expect all this positive attitude from any1, mostly beacause my first submission flopped. Happy u enjoyed it =D
Best regards

Very Smooth, and I'm still alive man!

This sounds like something u might hear on the ending story for Soul Callibur or something dude, very heroic sounding. I look forward to our hopefully future collab! This summer I will be online a lot so we can hopefully keep in better touch man! Great work!

-Alyk

MaestroSorrow responds:

for sure man, I need to get back in touch with a lot of friends from here on NG, and I still want to collab with you.

Hopefully soon ^^.

Thanks for the review.

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